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#1 Jade

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Posted 19 February 2011 - 09:12 PM

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Pen to Paper;
Here you will find all my poetry, I had the exact same thread on the other forum.
I will not post all the same poetry as on the last one.
You may see one or two familiar one's, but, since 2 years ago I have been writing more.
I have tweaked some and some are new. I adore writing poetry; it releases my feelings at the time.
My poetry is inspired on my emotions at the time of writing them. I'm not brilliant, but, I give it a shot.

Enjoy!


Edited by Hermione, 19 February 2011 - 09:12 PM.


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Posted 19 February 2011 - 09:35 PM

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All this blood,
I see it flood,

Down my wrist,
It begins to twist,

With every trickle,
It begins to tickle,

My vision fades,
As I drop the blades...


Edited by Hermione, 19 February 2011 - 09:36 PM.


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Posted 19 February 2011 - 10:26 PM

:)


But enjoy? How many will admit to enjoying that?

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Posted 19 February 2011 - 10:53 PM

You write very well, I look forward to reading more :yesyes:
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Posted 20 February 2011 - 06:47 PM

:)
But enjoy? How many will admit to enjoying that?

Erm, thanks? Like I said I write to how I feel at the time.
That is an old one tweaked.

You write very well, I look forward to reading more :yesyes:

Thank you, xD

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Posted 20 February 2011 - 07:03 PM

i like the rimes :) i'm pretty good with reading into poetry (since symbolism is my favorite poetry current)Anyway the feeling you are sending aren't very positive(that's pretty obvious :P )but most of the great poets inspired their best creations from pain :)
hope to read more soon :)

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Posted 21 February 2011 - 04:45 PM

i like the rimes :) i'm pretty good with reading into poetry (since symbolism is my favorite poetry current)Anyway the feeling you are sending aren't very positive(that's pretty obvious :P )but most of the great poets inspired their best creations from pain :)
hope to read more soon :)

Thank you and yeah! I was pretty emotional at the time. >.<

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Posted 23 February 2011 - 08:31 PM

nice poem hun<33

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Posted 23 February 2011 - 09:53 PM

nice poem hun<33

Thanks Stef. (: <3

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Posted 11 April 2011 - 10:20 PM

I liked your poem, well written and it made me feel squeamish.

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Posted 18 April 2011 - 10:58 AM

I liked your poem, well written and it made me feel squeamish.

Thank you I have some more but I forgot about this thread. I'll see which one I can post next. :P




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